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Post by misaki on Jul 13, 2008 19:37:36 GMT -5
PICTURE URL [/IMG][/center] &. basics.. stats.. Name;;Misaki Uchiha Age;;21 Height;;5'5" Weight;;125 Lbs Gender;;Female Rank;;Jounin Village;;Konohagakure No Sato
&. in depth..
Birthday;;October 14th
Strengths;;Fire Lightning Weaknesses;;Water Wind
Backround;;Born to two Uchihas, she trained extremely hard and learned fast, gaining sharingan at age 8. Her parents made a deal with orochimaru. If orochimaru could make it so her eyes never make her go blind they will surrender their eyes and bodies to orochimaru. Orochimaru then began to work on her eyes, in the process, activating her Eternal mangekyou sharingan. After he proved that she would never go blind, her parents gave them selfs up to orochimaru. Orochimaru then gave her the Heaven curse mark since her parents could not refuse, just to see if she could survive it. At age 10 she joined the academy and graduated that year.
She then became a genin, and never failed a mission. Her friends were afraid of her after the news got spread that she was tested on by orochimaru. She did not let it bother her. She raised herself after orochimaru left her because she refused to be his test subject. She became a chunnin soon after, passing every mission given to her. She then became a jounin, and she is still one now. The kage still trusts her and is not afraid. She has copied many jutsu from other jounins, chunnins, and even genin. Living arrangements;;apartment (same size as naruto's) in middle of konoha
Clan;;Uchiha Clan Description;; The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.
Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.
Jutsu;; •Ninjutsu- Great Fireball Technique Rank: C
Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique Rank: C
Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C
String Reeling Technique Rank: Unknown (probably D or E)
Shadowing Stealth Technique Rank: Unknown (Probably D)
Underground Fish Projection Rank: C
Great Dragon Fire Technique Rank: N/A (probably B)
Transformation Technique Rank: E
Shadow Clone Technique Rank: B
Release Genjutsu Rank: N/A
Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique Rank: E
Change of Body Stance Technique Rank:E
Double Suicide Decapitation Technique Rank: D
Body Flicker Technique Rank: D
Summoning Jutsu (Mountain Lion) Rank:N/A
•Genjutsu- Mist Servant Technique Rank: D
False Place Technique Rank: C
Sly Mind Affect Technique Rank: C
Ameratsu Rank: N/A
Mirror Heaven and Earth Change Rank:N/A
Hell Viewing Technique Rank: D
Temple of Nirvana Technique Rank: A
Tsukuyomi Rank:N/A
Ephemeral Rank: N/A
•Taijutsu- Clone Spinning Heel Drop Rank: Unknown
Clone Ramming Suicide Attack Rank: A
Dynamic • Entry Rank: D
Strong Arm(Sakura's) Rank: N/A
Leaf Great Whirlwind Rank:C
Lion Combo Rank: C
&. personality..
Favorite Food;;Beef Ramen Hated food;;Spinach
Looks;;
Hobbies & interests;;Misaki loves to read drama novels. She also loves to sleepin. Her favorite place to be is the hotsprings or on a mission.
About your shinobi;; Born to two Uchihas, she trained extremely hard and learned fast, gaining sharingan at age 8. Her parents made a deal with orochimaru. If orochimaru could make it so her eyes never make her go blind they will surrender their eyes and bodies to orochimaru. Orochimaru then began to work on her eyes, in the process, activating her Eternal mangekyou sharingan. After he proved that she would never go blind, her parents gave them selfs up to orochimaru. Orochimaru then gave her the Heaven curse mark since her parents could not refuse, just to see if she could survive it. At age 10 she joined the academy and graduated that year.
She then became a genin, and never failed a mission. Her friends were afraid of her after the news got spread that she was tested on by orochimaru. She did not let it bother her. She raised herself after orochimaru left her because she refused to be his test subject. She became a chunnin soon after, passing every mission given to her. She then became a jounin, and she is still one now. The kage still trusts her and is not afraid. She has copied many jutsu from other jounins, chunnins, and even genin.
PASSWORD: Attack of.
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Post by Switch||Anko on Jul 14, 2008 10:37:20 GMT -5
Alright, you got the password wrong, unless they changed it without me knowing, an admin modified it, or you did that to show us that you read the rules and didn't want others to find out without reading the rules. So, anyways, I'm not sure that Uchihas are aloud, have to go check up on the rules, plus, your character seems a bit to powerful. Not failing one mission, come on. Another thing is, that I don't think that Orochimaru would test on someone that young, so, check with an admin and see if thats alright. I'll wait for another staff member to post in this before i Approve it.
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Post by Hatake, Kakashi on Jul 14, 2008 16:16:32 GMT -5
Never failing a mission is not unreasonable, nor unheard of in the Shinobi world. As for the Uchiha thing, Im also not sure about that and what Venus thinks. He is right though, that is too young and there is no way to gain Mangekyou Sharingan without the known costs.
--Yawns--
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Post by Shorichi Ryu on Jul 15, 2008 4:22:55 GMT -5
Now when I wanted to make an Uchiha, I needed to get permission from Sasuke, so you will need to wait until then and also, Kakashi and Switch are right. Also, I think that an Uchiha would need to be a lot more detailed than what you have as they are very, very complicated characters to play and only those who have the best of abilities should play them. Not saying you are not in the category, but you need to show that you are. But thats just me, anyone else want to add to this?
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Post by Switch||Anko on Jul 15, 2008 9:06:59 GMT -5
Go read the rules please, you should know that that is not all of the password, if you even read the rules in the first place. Get permission from Sasuke, and also put some more detail into it ^^
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Post by Shorichi Ryu on Jul 15, 2008 21:15:21 GMT -5
Also, with the Sharingan, look at Sasuke, he had to wait until the battle with Haku to get Sharingan, so please make sure that you go into more detail with that, did she suffer like Sasuke did in a battle? Or did something else happen to her in order to get the Sharingan? Then she MUST gain the Mangekyou Sharingan first in order to achieve Eternal, and Itachi did not achieve Mangekyou until he killed his best friend, so you can either have her kill her best friend or like Sasuke think of her best friend as dead to her or like Kakashi think of a traumatic experience, like the day he lost Orbito. Now it is up to you, but wait until Sasuke gives approval for you making an Uchiha first and also like Switch said, read the rules again and get the final part to the password, please.
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Post by Hatake, Kakashi on Jul 15, 2008 22:32:26 GMT -5
Sasuke hasn't been very active =/ best just to ask Venus, it is her site after all.
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Post by Hyuuga Hinata on Jul 16, 2008 21:05:10 GMT -5
Heh. As fellow Staff Member, I thought I'd add my opinion. ^^; Sorry if this kind of...hurts to read? x.o Just doing my job. Sorry. I just felt I should add my opinion to those of Switch, Ryu, and Kakashi, who were all very good with assessing your application.
Well, I hate to say this, but, your Background has what I like to call MSD, or, Mary Sue Disorder.
I'm being blunt and I know I might seem kind of harsh with this, but, really. I don't like the background at all, to put it bluntly. Then again, maybe it's just my thing against Custom Uchiha's? Well, Either way, your character is impossibly strong, which kind of made me uncomfortable. Kage-level? I'm sorry, but, unless your character *is* a kage or one of the people mentioned in the plot, they simply can not possess that kind of skills. Otherwise, why wouldn't she *be* a Kage? I mean, I'm sure Tsunade would pass the torch to someone if their power really did exceed her own.
She's a copyright of Itachi as far as I'm concerned with her skill level. I mean, even if she was born of Two Uchiha's, she would still have to work very hard.
...Let me tell you briefly why I don't like custom Uchiha clan members-- The Uchiha clan was killed. End of story. Let's say she *was* a prodigy like Itachi and Madara. She would have been killed anyway. I mean, Shisui was a prodigy. Look what happened to him. XD
I know that I'm kind or repeating what Switch, Ryu, and Kakashi said, but, still. ^^; I'm sorry if I'm playing evil moderator here, but, this is what needs to be said. Yet, as they said, the decision is mainly up to Venus. She gets to decide. Yet, if it were up to me, I'd probably wouldn't approve it, and tell you the same thing I just said here. I see a lot of potential in your writing style, but, as a MSD Custom Uchiha, that's all being wasted in my mind.
Please don't hate me for this. ^^;;; It's part of my job. Yet, I do think that you should make a different OC. I'm just trying to be honest. I'm usually a very social person who just loves to chat. Yet, all in all, I try to be of use to Venus. Kind of like my character tries to prove herself to everyone, I try to prove myself too. Sadly, I'm not nearly as delicate with my words as Hinata is with hers. Whoops!
Believe it or not, I'm trying to say it gently... ^^;;;
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Post by Switch||Anko on Jul 29, 2008 15:02:58 GMT -5
You haven't even relpied to this thread, and you went inactive. If you ever want to come back to the site and use this bio, pm a staff member and have them move it back to here, because I'm gonna go ahead and move it to the Denied board. Other staff members, if I'm doing something wrong by doing this, or I don't have the power to, please let me know
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